Xiaolin Showdown Porn Story: Fatal Attraction 3 The Stone Castle Chapter 6
I
had a lot of fun writing this chapter! Hope you enjoy it.
Xiaolinwind:
Aw,
thank you so much! Your review made me smile! Thanks for it!
MooseTracks2020:
Haha, dont we all love an angsty scene on and off? Yep, go girls!
We only allow men to be active in the world because wed be bored
without them. ;) And I thought that was clever (you said you were
gonna cut the review sho-). And I totally know what you mean! When
its late at night, you get a little loopey. Me and my sis stayed
up one night to watch Xiaolin Showdown, on DVD, and one scene Rai
didnt have his orange sleeves on his shirt. It was skin colored.
We died laughing and watched the scene again and again. We made up a
plot where the robot beside him had stolen his sleeves . . .yeah, it
was 2:00 am. Yep, Jonas Brothers and Hannah Montana are annoying.
Bleh. Thanks for the review!!
Oblivion
King of Darkness: Haha,
cool pen name. Ive never seen Naruto, mostly because I dont
have cable so I dont get the show. I say the took my idea! Lol J/K
Welcome to the fanfic, and thanks for reviewing!
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Will Consume You: Haha,
thanks so much! Your review made me very happy! Nice pen name,
reminds me of Siegfried, if you know who he is. ;) Welcome to my
story and thanks for your review!
Anna
Maria: Clays
castle and stonemen are a bit similar to Wuyas, yes. But his
stonemen are person-sized. Theyre smaller, without faces,
basically. Cool, Im a big Avril Lavigne fan! And I did a lip-sync
performance in Drama class to a Spice Girls song. Haha, it was fun!
Thanks for your review!
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Anonymous:
Is
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your review!
MySpaceSavvy:
Haha,
yeah, Im a big Zelda fan! Did you have a Link to the Past? And yes
(about the Rai being evil thing) I like antihero stories, too! Yeah,
Brad Paisleys still a guy online, huh? Lol Thanks for reviewing!
Im
going to Oklahoma City this weekend, so there wont be any quick
updates or replies to PMs.
Disclaimer:
I dont own Xiaolin Showdown or the title
Rated
T for an amazing and astonishing amount of violence, which is usually
stylized and Kung Fu centric, and contains situations where beloved
characters get bodily injured. XD Just had to shake the rating up a
bit!
CH.
6
Raimundo
moaned as he was thrown to the ground. He saw he was a square room.
He also noticed a large hole in the wall.
He
turned and bolted for it. He threw himself out into the air, hundreds
of feet above ground.
He
looked to his left to see the stonemen riding on large rocks, heading
to him.
He
grinned. If you think you can keep up, lets rock! Wind!
He
shot down toward the earth. Glancing behind him, he made a sharp
u-turn. The stonemen followed.
He
headed slightly down and toward one of the massive rock columns that
held up the castle.
Right
when he was about to hit it, he turned and pushed off of it with his
feet, going up.
He
stopped and looked down to see one enemy smash into it, falling to
pieces. The other three curved after him.
He
went straight at one. It pulled up short to hit him. He knocked its
fist aside and pushed the stoneman up to the castle. When he got even
with the castle, he grabbed the rock creatures wrist and spun
around, flinging him deep inside.
Then
another rock creature slammed into him from the side. He fell down a
few feet and the two enemies grabbed his wrists, taking him down
toward the earth.
Raimundo
swung up both of his legs and kicked the stonemen in the head. Their
heads flew off into the sky. Then he slammed his heels down on their
wrists, breaking them off.
He
turned and headed down quickly as the creatures grew back heads and
hands.
He
curved to the right and went toward the ocean. He reached into his
pocket and pulled out the Falcons Eye. He looked threw the water
and saw a jutting coral column.
He
glanced back to be sure they were following, then shot down to the
water. Instead of hitting the water, his velocity and wind forced it
back and he moved to contact the side of the coral column. He ran
along it, heading down. He heard a crash behind him as one of the
stonemen hit it.
The
water fell down behind him and he held his breath as it filled back
up.
He
swam to the surface, taking a breath of air.
Then
the last enemy whipped by, grabbing him around his waist.
They
sped over the water until, about two seconds later, they were over a
sandy beach.
The
creature threw Raimundo down. He hit the sand and rolled over and
over until he stopped several feet away.
He
looked up to see the stoneman coming at him, when it burst into
pebbles and was sent hurling into the ocean.
Rai
just stayed there, on his elbows, breathing hard. Then he looked to
the side to see Master Monk Guan and Chase Young smiling at him.
Master
Monk Guan kneeled beside him. Are you all right?
Raimundo
nodded. Omi-
We
know, Chase said. And Im about to go get him.
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Omi
stood in the Yin Yang World, glancing around. He didnt know what
to do. Dojo slithered out from his robe.
This
isnt good, Dojo said.
Omi
kicked at the fog in frustration. It rolled back.
You
okay? Dojo asked.
Omi
turned to him. I am worried about Kimiko and Raimundo and even
myself! I am stuck here and cannot do anything! And I am stuck with
you.
Hey,
Dojo said, dont be mad at me.
Omi
sat down, sighing. Sorry.
They
stayed in silence for awhile, when the air shimmered to their right.
Omi
stood up.
Dojo
asked, What is that?
Then
it turned into a portal and Chase Young came through, smiling.
Chase
Young! Omi gasped.
Chase
crossed his arms. I came to rescue you, no need to thank me.
Rescue
me? Omi said. You are going to help us again?
Instead
of answering, Chase said, Master Monk Guan said he was coming to
the temple and saw it vacant and destroyed. He came to me to see if I
knew anything about it. We went as close to the castle as we could
get and I had my crow snatch the yo-yos.
Omi
frowned. How did you know I was in the Yin Yang World?
Chase
cocked a grin. Master Monk Guan and I can sense much when we
combine our chi. By the way, on our way to the castle, we came across
Raimundo.
Omi
gasped. Is he okay?
Chase
nodded. Hes in my lair with Master Monk Guan. Now lets go.
Dojo
went back into Omis robe and Omi walked up to the portal by Chase.
Chase,
Omi said, . . .thank you.
Chase
grinned and they went through.
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. .This was a lot longer on paper. Oh, well.
Note
From the Psychology Corner:
I , a two year student of psychology, have heard about a handy trick
when you cant fall asleep. In case you didnt know, the reason
you cant fall asleep is because youre thinking too much. ( A
sure sign of an intelligent brain ;) ) So, count from 1-10, 10-1,
1-10, 10-1, and on and on OUT LOUD. You must count out loud (even if
its just whispering) because when you count out loud your brain
cant think that much. Its concentrating on counting. It really
works! Try it out!
One
more thing: I have a ninja turtles fanfic Im also working on (this
one is my favorite to work on, though. Shh, dont tell anybody!)
But people dont review that much on it. I get emails where readers
add it to their alerts and favorites, but they never review. So if
you even slightly like the ninja turtles, please review that story
for me so that it looks more impressive on the outside! You dont
even have to do it more than once! Its called Eclipse of the
Heart. Thanks!
And
also, please review!! (this story, of course) ;)